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strobing a bride...

Postby jdear on Tue Aug 12, 2008 11:56 pm

Hey all, Im in the middle of editing some photos from Saturday's wedding and I've a quick one to share. I have been getting into strobist.com and Im getting more confident in using off-camera flash at weddings (only my 2nd wedding trying it out). Anyway I was stoked with the result and Im excited about adding it to my repoirtre to create different looks from the same day...

This was taken at Bradley's Head, mosman, which I did end up getting an annual license for... (don't start me on it)

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Catcha on Wed Aug 13, 2008 12:24 am

Thats a very nice shot Jonathan, I think you have nailed it, in my eyes anyway :D
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Glen on Wed Aug 13, 2008 1:08 am

Very nice image Jonathan.



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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Marvin on Wed Aug 13, 2008 9:16 am

Beautiful shot. I'm sure the bride will be thrilled.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby chrisk on Wed Aug 13, 2008 10:26 am

beautiful shot. love the colour and exposure.
would have liked to see more of the dress, shame you dont have a wider angle lens.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby jdear on Wed Aug 13, 2008 12:17 pm

would have liked to see more of the dress, shame you dont have a wider angle lens.

I took the above at 35mm and I also got a wider shot at 24mm which shows the whole dress :)
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Smurph on Wed Aug 13, 2008 3:37 pm

Nice work.

I like the above shot, would be interested to see how it turned out at 24 as well.

I think the 35mm shot shows just enough of the dress to make the bride and photo look elegant.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Alex on Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:03 pm

Very nice lighting - well balanced. Very crisp shot.

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby makario on Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:11 pm

great shot, love the lighting.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Oneputt on Wed Aug 13, 2008 4:57 pm

Stunning, you have to be happy with this :D
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby marcotrov on Wed Aug 13, 2008 7:19 pm

A beautifully composed image with wonderfully balanced lighting. Superb image Jonathon. Mind sharing your set up?
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby jdear on Wed Aug 13, 2008 8:29 pm

Hey all, thanks for the kind words!

Technical Info:

single 580exII speedlight at 24mm at 1/8 power in lastolite 15x15" ezybox (softbox) above camera right about 2 metres away from bride fired with PWs. 5D with 24-70L at f4.5, 1/50s @640iso zoomed to 35mm.

only just got the ezybox but Im loving it!
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Yi-P on Thu Aug 14, 2008 11:05 pm

Very nicely defined lights and well exposed dress :D

jdear wrote:single 580exII speedlight at 24mm at 1/8 power in lastolite 16x16" ezybox (softbox)


Just a quick question, how did you mount the speedlight and softbox together? And where about did you get the softbox?
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby jdear on Fri Aug 15, 2008 1:35 am

the lastolite ezybox kit I bought has a mounting bracket for the flash itself. Mounted on a monopod held by a voice-activated light stand.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby carla_d on Fri Aug 15, 2008 6:01 am

great shot. i'd like to see the wider shot too. it looks like a nice dress ;)
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Hudo on Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:41 pm

Love the shot. Just picked up one of the soft boxes today based on this thread. I hope to try it out Sunday. Have been using the Lumilux (?) soft boxes on off camera flashes with some success. This solution is still portable and hopefully gives a sotfer light.

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby JordanP on Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:17 pm

Nailed the exposure - but skin tone is not as warm/rich as I like (mind you that is only my tastes - kind of looks flashy to me) - mind you it fits with the look of the rest of the wedding so I'm guessing it is spot on to your tastes (there is a great selection on his blog if you want to see more....)

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Oct 07, 2008 2:49 pm

Gorgeous shot worth of a strobist front page, beautifully done I can see you using this technique more as your confidence with the gear grows. Awesome stuff.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby DaveB on Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:22 pm

Nicely done!

Mind you, the landscape photographer in me worries about the tilted waterline. But I guess the bride is unlikely to look at those parts of the image. ;)
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby aim54x on Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:26 pm

Well done. Using off camera flash whilst on the move can be rather interesting (I was using a SB600 off camera whilst shooting a graduation earlier this year) but the rewards - as demonstrated by the result above - can be huge. Awesome work, dont worry about that waterline, i didnt notice it until it was mentioned.

I love the way she has this glow about her against the darker background. Beautiful lighting!!!

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Hudo on Tue Oct 07, 2008 3:30 pm

Hi Dave,

Well spotted. Never noticed that until you pointed it out... I guess the tide was running out? mmmm That's why I don;t shoot landscapes......

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby mycl on Sat Oct 11, 2008 3:05 am

Very nice! As per jordanP, tones a bit whitish, but very even exposure and composition.
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Postby [kane] on Sat Oct 11, 2008 7:31 pm

Great shot! I might have adjusted the horizon a bit though.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby zafra52 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:54 pm

I like it!
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Postby soarer on Mon Oct 13, 2008 9:06 pm

Thats a great shot, I love it,
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby Matt. K on Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:46 pm

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Nice work. I would have liked to see the background a little darker...about 1.5 stops...and a little more of the dress. But a nice shot anyway!
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby walnutroof on Thu Oct 16, 2008 4:21 pm

[quote="jdear"]Hey all, Im in the middle of editing some photos from Saturday's wedding and I've a quick one to share. I have been getting into strobist.com and Im getting more confident in using off-camera flash at weddings (only my 2nd wedding trying it out). Anyway I was stoked with the result and Im excited about adding it to my repoirtre to create different looks from the same day...

This was taken at Bradley's Head, mosman, which I did end up getting an annual license for... (don't start me on it)

Image

thanks for looking :)

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby ewm3 on Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:15 pm

Im a newbie too; I don't know if this is :ot: because you did mention it! What's this about having to have a licence to take these pictures? Some of us newbies might not be aware of the problems you 'pros' have.
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby gstark on Thu Oct 16, 2008 6:46 pm

ewm3 wrote:What's this about having to have a licence to take these pictures? Some of us newbies might not be aware of the problems you 'pros' have.


There's a couple of issues here.

Some councils ask that one have a license because of "wear and tear" upon council (public!) facilities under their control. In certain situations this may even be justifiable. Wedding parties, for instance, might bring up to a half dozen vehicles to a location to participate in a shoot, and that may have an impact upon the quiet enjoyment of the facilities by others. Some might argue that the councils are acting in the manner of prostitutes, and the only thing that matters is their price. :)

The second issue is one imposed by the Sydney Harbour Foreshore Authority. (Or is it the Sydney Harbour Foreskin Authority? I can never remember, and besides, the current state (lack of) government is constantly renaming its various bodies so that it matters little, at the end of the day.)

Anyhow, SHFA imposes a license fee when somebody shoots, commercially, at the harbour foreshores. Basically, public edifices, such as the coathanger and sailboat are not there for the public's enjoyment at all, but they're actually revenue centres for the SHFA. Include one in your image: Ka-ching!

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby jdear on Fri Oct 17, 2008 5:59 pm

Nice work. I would have liked to see the background a little darker...about 1.5 stops...and a little more of the dress

I actually lightened the background from the original which was darker because I wanted the light more balanced with the ambient (personal taste in this case)

Geez I guess I have to post more with the whole dress showing!
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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby jethro on Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:05 pm

To be fair to all, I have commented on some of Dans shots as far as skin tones are concerned. I may be anal but skin is skin and skin colour in white people is more yellow than magenta. Colour correction is an important result that has to be taken into account in generalised imaging. Especially Wedding photography.

Photoshop has a great tool called selective colour correction. Use the red channel and as digital shots as a general rule seem to shoot predominantely magenta in skin tone, increase the yellow slider so the yellow channel is about 5-15% more than the magenta channel. Use the info pallette to measure the results. This will give a more realistic skin colour result.

This is my opinion only and after a long time in the industry this isi the correct way to balance skin tones. If you have any questions please PM and Ill give the guff.

I like the comp of this image but the colour temperature is not correct, that is commercially speaking.

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Re: strobing a bride...

Postby scott s on Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:14 pm

jethro wrote:... I may be anal but skin is skin and skin colour in white people is more yellow than magenta. Colour correction is an important result that has to be taken into account in generalised imaging.

1. should we send that to Nicole Kidmans photographer's / make up staff /joke !!
2. temperature /WB might be a bit cool, though pushing it up a notch may upset the rest of the images colours, which i reckon are spot on...

two things i thought of, well three actually;

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