Oneputt will be Livid

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Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Bob G on Tue May 27, 2008 8:10 pm

I photographed this sloop up the river several weeks ago and I know Oneputt went down several times to capture it in morning light without success. He recently told me it had moved to the mouth of the river and he had been waiting for a good sunset for several days.
John managed a pretty darn good shot of it on the weekend.
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This afternoon the sky just lit up and I was lucky enough to be there for it.
Not only was there a great sunset but it was also really calm. I know John is in Melbourne and will be really pissed he missed this sunset.
I have at least a dozen brilliant shots from various angles and with evolving sky colour as the sun set.
Sorry you weren't here John. :)

This pic has minimal PP work done.

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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Merkyone on Tue May 27, 2008 8:36 pm

That my friend, is an amazing photo!!!!
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Glen on Tue May 27, 2008 8:39 pm

Very nice Bob
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Pehpsi on Tue May 27, 2008 8:41 pm

Top notch. I'd be spewin' if I missed that too!

It does seem to lean right a little?
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby ozimax on Tue May 27, 2008 9:23 pm

striiiike me pink, this is POTY material, amazing.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby big pix on Tue May 27, 2008 9:26 pm

nice shot bob, looks great on my new 24 inch iMac....... and John will not be happy, so pray :roll: :lol: :lol:
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby chrisk on Tue May 27, 2008 9:27 pm

dayummmmmm :shock: un-frickin-believable. :shock:
apart from the fact that its a pearler of a photo i'm also thankful for the much simpler border you used on this one.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby antman on Tue May 27, 2008 9:37 pm

Beautiful !
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby paulmac on Tue May 27, 2008 11:17 pm

Astounding stuff. Where's the vote button?

I assume you're half way to tracking down the sloop's owner, who'd just love to buy a nice expensive print of this...
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Louie on Tue May 27, 2008 11:22 pm

Wow :shock:

Amazing stuff, well captured.
Not much else to say that has not already been said! :)
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby sirhc55 on Tue May 27, 2008 11:48 pm

Holy crap is that what a Qld dawn looks like - absolutely wonderful :)
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby surenj on Tue May 27, 2008 11:54 pm

what a cracker of a photo! POTW hands down
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Shorty on Wed May 28, 2008 12:17 am

WOW! That is stunning...

Fantastic shot!!

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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby potato1 on Wed May 28, 2008 12:54 am

Beautiful shot, I like how you've kept the entire reflection in the shot. Defintely POTW. :up:
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby the foto fanatic on Wed May 28, 2008 9:00 am

Fantastic pic - well done! :)
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Reschsmooth on Wed May 28, 2008 9:41 am

It's alright, I guess, if you like perfect sunsets, awesome boats, beautiful waterscape and stuff like that. :D :D Well captured.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Geoff on Wed May 28, 2008 10:49 am

Incredibly beautiful image Bob - well done.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Nigell on Wed May 28, 2008 11:21 am

Really like this one. I especially like the way you have managed to use the rule of thirds here. I like the idea that although you have a centralised figure, it becomes the point by which we see what is effectively a window with 4 parts all working towards an overall whole. Colours are nice and I like the play and balance of the image overall.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby PiroStitch on Wed May 28, 2008 11:58 am

holy cow! very nice!
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby makario on Wed May 28, 2008 2:52 pm

wow, very nice colors... stunning capture that.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Big Red on Wed May 28, 2008 3:27 pm

holy crap .... thats awesome :mrgreen:

when he gets back i'll be able to hear John swear from here :lol:
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby camrak on Wed May 28, 2008 3:50 pm

Awesome for me - this color gradations, almost all spectrum on the sky connected with this siluette shape - from my point of view ***** for this photo!
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Bindii on Wed May 28, 2008 6:06 pm

Oh wow.. its superb.. the only thing wrong with it is...

that I didn't take it... *cries*

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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby marcotrov on Wed May 28, 2008 6:49 pm

Superb capture and perfect timing and balanced composition Bob. Impressive!
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Bob G on Thu May 29, 2008 11:11 am

Thanks all - for your comments and enthusiastic support for the image.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby CraigVTR on Thu May 29, 2008 12:27 pm

Great shot Bob.
Is this the boat that was moored in Petrie Creek during its refurbishment over the last few years?
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby Bob G on Thu May 29, 2008 6:23 pm

CraigVTR wrote:Great shot Bob.
Is this the boat that was moored in Petrie Creek during its refurbishment over the last few years?


Could be Craig - not 100% sure.
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Re: Oneputt will be Livid

Postby SteveGriffin on Thu May 29, 2008 10:42 pm

Yet another beautiful shot Bob. The time, money and energy that you have invested is surely paying dividends now. Keep up the fantastic work
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