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				Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 8:42 amby PiroStitch
				So the previous attempt didn't make me happy so I worked on it some more.
Before

After

I wanted to accentuate the texture of the clouds in the background which would increase the highlight on the tree.
Thoughts?
 
			
		
			
				Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 8:48 amby chrisk
				I like the second version better, the first was a little flat. Not convinced on the image as a whole though.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:17 amby Reschsmooth
				I prefer the first as a photograph and the second as a fantastical image, less related to reality, if you know what I mean.
Whilst not possible, a bigger tree would have more impact.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 6:10 pmby Matt. K
				I much prefer the first image....a classic B&W shot...but it could do with just a touch of brightening. I like the dark and moody  look. Second image has been way overdone in my opinion. By the way....it is an excellent photograph in the style of Ansel Adams. I love it!
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:04 pmby biggerry
				first one all teh way home... the sky and clouds are very nice, the boosted contrast in the second has just overcooked it. I am with Matt, just a little brightening and a small touch of contrast.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:59 pmby surenj
				I would also prefer somewhere inbetween #1 and #2.
Rooz wrote:Not convinced on the image as a whole though.
 
 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:31 pmby PiroStitch
				Matt. K wrote: By the way....it is an excellent photograph in the style of Ansel Adams. I love it!
Thanks Matt.  That's what drew me to the spending the time to photograph the tree.
surenj wrote:Rooz wrote:Not convinced on the image as a whole though.
 
 
Good thing I only shoot for my own pleasure then  

 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Mon Apr 23, 2012 1:38 amby surenj
				PiroStitch wrote:Good thing I only shoot for my own pleasure then  
Doubt it. I am no art buyer/artist (appreciater) although I don't know about Rooz.  

 Despite this I gave two cents worth. Go figure.
 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:23 amby Remorhaz
				I'm also in the preferring #1 camp for this image with perhaps a little more lightening behind the top of the tree. But I can see where you were going with the second (I find myself heading the same way with a number of my monochromes these days).
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:24 amby PiroStitch
				Ok taken most of the constructive feedback on board and given it another whirl.

Here's a 100% crop of what I see on my screen.  The smaller version really doesn't do it enough justice.

 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Tue Apr 24, 2012 9:30 amby Reschsmooth
				That is significantly better and a great balance between the two. 
AA would be proud. (But change the tree 

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				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:35 pmby surenj
				You are in the zone with #3.  

 
			
		
			
				Re: Reworked midday tree
				
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Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:13 pmby zafra52
				I believe the 3rd one is an improvement
on 1, and 2. It's has more light than 1 and
is less sharp than 2 and this makes it looks
more natural.