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Postby Manta on Tue Dec 12, 2006 9:47 pm

A simple shot of the top of a water bottle in front of a chopping board full of vegies! For me, the colours just worked. Your thoughts are very welcome (50mm1.4, f2.5, 1/40, no flash, handheld)

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Postby NJ on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:00 pm

hmm seems over saturated on my monitor, its soooo bright and colourful! :P
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Postby Manta on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:13 pm

Thanks for looking NJ - I played with the curve to push the colours as I deliberately wanted the effect.
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Postby NJ on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:15 pm

no probs simon, well you got the effect then :P i had to squint to see it hahaha
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Postby Manta on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:18 pm

Grab those sunnies! 8)
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:20 pm

I’ll get back to you Simon when the retina burn clears up :lol: :lol:
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Postby NJ on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:26 pm

hahahaha! :lol:
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Postby stetner on Tue Dec 12, 2006 10:34 pm

Nice, but a bit too intense for my eye.... I would back it off a notch :shock:
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Postby Slider on Tue Dec 12, 2006 11:26 pm

Looks OK to me. Nice n bright, colorful which was what I think you were after. Be a good stock piece. :D
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Postby blacknstormy on Tue Dec 12, 2006 11:30 pm

Intesting Simon ..........
can you put me down as sick tomorrow - feel a migraine coming on ;) LOL
Seriously though -well done :)
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Postby Aussie Dave on Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:26 am

Manta,
Interesting photo and great colours.

My preferance would be to have the lid of the bottle more in-focus, as I find it distracting (but that might just be me).

I don't find the colours too over-powering at all....but with the background so OOF, the viewer cannot distinguish what the background actually is....which may have been your intention, and if so, then it works a treat !

Good to see something different :)
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Postby mic on Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:10 am

Love it Simon,

If you can do what Dave says and nail it a tad more, I'd like this one on my site.

If you can be bothered again capturing it ?

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Postby Mr Darcy on Wed Dec 13, 2006 8:50 am

Just goes to show.

Good; No! Great photos can be found anywhere.

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