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time to put upI have been a bit slack, not posting much here although I visit fairly often... can we all say "lurker"
so without further ado was out at eastern creek a few weeks ago taking shots of the bikes when I remembers some saying on this forum that "motor sport images are suppose to be over saturated and vibrant" Have I gone to far I think yes then for something different it was a cloudy day, but the cloud bank stopped short of the horizon and during the last race of the sun dropped below the clouds just before it set and from where I was shooting I was looking straight into the sun and it was reflecting off the track... aahh moment... back lit near silhouette metering of the track reflection to stop any blown highlights I started panning... black frame, black frame, black frame, front wheel in the glow, back wheel in the glow, black frame it took about 10 panning burst before I caught a full bike in the glow and only managed two full images in about 100 frames before the race was over definitely something I will have to try again. all comment and suggestions on ways to improve both these images is most appreciated
Re: time to put upWhile I like the first, the second is an absolute corker!! Masterful!!
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couldn't agree more. it was worth the repetition - the mood of this image is spot on. nice work firsty! 5DmII + some L lenses
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Re: time to put upI think you have gone a bit far on the 1st.
The second is a fantastic effort. Way to go firsty. Regards Colin
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But it's fun trying, right? g.
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Re: time to put upLegend....#2 is awesome/
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if you have, its not by much imo - the image looks like a typical mag shot The second image is great! a different take on motosport imagery and you have made it look easy! top work. gerry's photography journey
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Re: time to put upI will have to be boring and say that the second is absolutely amazing!!
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Re: time to put up# 2 is great well worth the effort.
#1 the saturation on the bike is great but I think the background is a little overpowering. If you desat the background a touch it will be just right. Craig
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Re: time to put upBoth shots are great but I'd tone down the 1st a little. Top stuff!
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Re: time to put upI absolutely love your second image. It just makes me want to get back on a bike again. There's something evocative about the image that makes the rider look all alone in a world of their own. Have you thought about slightly cropping in? Probably not much but just enough to bring the bike in a little closer. A really nice effect and one I want to try myself.
Re: time to put upThe second would be even more perfect if his knees were down
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