Weekender Nine- Paulmac

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Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby paulmac on Sun Sep 28, 2008 11:43 pm

Theme 1: ... moonscape
I wish I wish I wish I had a Lego spaceman to complete this otherwise lame-arse attempt...
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Theme 2: ... train
Waiting for a train to come past, this country service was the first to come hurtling through. All of about one metre away from me...
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Theme 3: ... using flash
As soon as I saw this topic, I had this picture in my mind.
Thanks to Patricia, and all of today's Melbourne meet people for (cough) lending a hand :up: to make it work.
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Theme 4: ... motorcycle
Shot through a shopfront window in South Yarra.
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As always, a great excuse to get out and be creative. Thanks Big Red.
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby biggerry on Mon Sep 29, 2008 12:20 am

I wish I wish I wish I had a Lego spaceman to complete this otherwise lame-arse attempt...


lol.. yeah a little lego man with his US flag would have been perfect!

nice set of pictures though, very creative on the 'flash' one! and the train blur really provides a sense of speed....
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby Big Red on Mon Sep 29, 2008 9:53 am

great thinking on the flash shot 8)
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Sep 29, 2008 10:16 am

The flash shot - spot on. Well done!
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby TonyT on Mon Sep 29, 2008 6:59 pm

I too like the flash shot
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby pucara on Mon Sep 29, 2008 10:09 pm

very good work Paul....very creative..... :lol: ..Carlos...
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby soarer on Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:10 pm

Hey you can see my hand in that flash one.. good stuff mate...
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Re: Weekender Nine- Paulmac

Postby whoalse on Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:47 pm

Nice ones........Love the flash shot and I see my hand too! Hahaha.....
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