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Early morning walk

Postby ja_S_on on Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:52 am

I recently decided to take up photography and purchased a shiny new 40D. After dwelling on the subject for long enough i have finally decided to try my chances at posting some photos - so here goes!

Here are some of the results of an early morning walk on the weekend:

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Comments and criticism welcome!

Thanks
Jason
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Re: Early morning walk

Postby PiroStitch on Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:57 am

really like the composition of the last one and the conversion as well. all the photos look very serene.
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Re: Early morning walk

Postby surenj on Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:30 am

:agree: I think the last one is crying out for some sun rays and perhaps some fog..
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Re: Early morning walk

Postby blacknstormy on Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:31 pm

Hi Jason - I love the last 2 shots - the second last one has so much hidden in the darkness - if you have a little play in PS, it actually comes up a treat (have sent you a pm). The last shot is great, and you've handled the tones well - looking forward to seeing some more shots from you
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Re: Early morning walk

Postby ozonejunkie on Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:01 pm

About time you managed to post some photos! Getting me out of bed early and all for the occasion...

I really do love that fourth one, a nice capture all round. I will have to run through my photos that I took that morning and see if I got any good ones!

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Re: Early morning walk

Postby jdear_89 on Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:30 pm

You could put the fourth one on a stock photography site...
The 4th is my favorite by the way - like it how the lines lead my eyes through the shot.
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